If I might make a suggestion at this point please,
Perhaps a more dispassionate and objective statement of-
A) Exactly what it is you are trying to achieve
B) What actions have been taken and responses received
C) A factual update.
Your enthusiasm is both understandable and admirable, but thus far it reads as a confusing jumble of "what ifs" and "If onlys".
I am sure that interest in this project would increase if hard facts and a solid proposal was posted here in a clear and informative manner.
I am sorry if this comes across as carping, that I assure you is not my intention.
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